You need to include more clips of you actually using your skill to use. Triple kills with the laser IS sick... just as long as its not on a warthog.

wheres the mlg??

Thanks xianoa for a good response, I appriciate the tips since this was only my first montage.

that was freakin terriable.

could be a lot better if you used the music to its full extent; edit the clips to sync with the musiceven then, you need a lot more for a montage than what you posted. i look forward to the full version now youve had some pointers on where to improve.