You have the skill and can get the clips, but you have NO editing skills what so ever. I could see an amazing montage coming from you if you learned to edit or maybe let someone else do it.
Besides the fact that everyone you played sucked fat ones, it was pretty good.Also be sure to press YY so that that when you are in theater mode the reticule shows. You don`t have to but when I see that in a montage it annoys me. 8/10