Yah, I might be wrong but I don`t think I saw one BxR that you completed correctly. Now don`t get me wrong you look like you haveskill, but I don`t beleive that was your full potential. If you make a montage it is with your BEST stuff. And honestly I do not think that was it. But give it time, nice editing though.
for a first montage it was not bad.
Small pointers if you choose to accept
1. better kills than double kills
-they are good but not as cool as a triple or killtacular
I mean you had one triple and it was at the end so work on that
2. different music
-I LOVE the music...but most people don`t so change it up maybe
3. no pp br combo
-no one really likes it unless it is like you used br and got a triple and then you plasma and beatdown or plasma and fire last shot for kill
Some people may disagree but I think those should be taken into consideration
Editing could`ve used some work, as well and gameplay.
If this was your first montage then I would say that you did a great job.
If it wasn`t your first then you need to work harder.