Don`t listen to BFaplenty22 if he didn`t realize that this isn`t a montage then he doesn`t know what isand also just like what ocelot and gilley said keep those nades away from you lol

You need to work a little more on your skill before you start your montages, or at least dont show you dying does not help you look good like a montage should. ALso if you add a little music you might make yourself look a little better. Maybe a couple video effects and some transitions. II PARAMOUNT II PRODUCTIONS always available to make someone look good. -II PARAMOUNT II PRODUCTIONS

Agree with OceloT, keep the nades away from you man :D

Not bad but try not to panic when throwing your grenades, just drop to the floor and try to get your sound into sync with the gameplay too!