Well, I`m a person who loves to critique gameplay, even of pros. So even though I may not be qualified to do so here it goes:Of course like other people said your br needs a litle bit of work, I think you are moving your right thumb stick just a tad too much.Around 2:15 when you are top B, you should not have jumped down to chase the guy on their B Dump, just because keeping top control on Onslaught is the most important aspect of the gametype.3:58- When you killed the guy no shields, instead of trying to continue to get the rest of their team down, you grabbed the flag. I also notice that neither of your teamates were even set up for a flag pull, which can be expected out of playing with random people. (You should have tried to nade Their B-side and continued to clear their base before pulling the flag.5:08- I don`t know what your reasoning was, but you didn`t throw the flag out bottom middle. However you did a good job of dropping it to try for the kill.Around 6:48- instead of jumping out bottom middle you should have stayed on top of your base to br from there, still helping your teamate run the flag.11:30-12:26 You did a great job of protecting the flag runner and making distractions!13:54 - When the guy was noshields your bottom B corner, you should have just backed up a bit a shot him instead of going in for the melee, giving him a chance to knock your shields off.All in all you had a great game, despite the few shaky parts with the BR. If you take the time to read this, thank you.(all of these times are according to the positive timer on the mlg video, not the timer in the actual game.)

You need a lot of work but there is potential i guess.

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Yeah I know I need some work but...anyways like in the description this video was really just to test out my setting for my Dazzle. But don`t be afraid to review the gameplay.