I kinda agree with Beadeddonkey.I heard one instance where you said ``I died, cause nobody called him out.`` Don`t say that. You don`t know what your teammates saw, for all you know, you were the first to see him.Just lessen up on blaming teammates/other things. Otherwise, great commentary.
Just some advice...it seems like you tend to blame some of your deaths on other people, etc. and even though they might be a teammates fault there is almost always something you could have done differently and I think you should incorporate this into some of the later videos. Overall good gameplay and helpful commentary, though.