most of the editin was tight (aside from the contrast) but it was way too dramatic for an unimpressive tage against bad kids. srry 2/5 hope ur next is better. if not, u might consider editin for other ppl.
nice tage only saying because I see you've tried to put alot of work into. Next tage will be better:). Next time record your clips without the nametag and have it with a crosshair. To get the crosshair in film clips you have to leave to free roam mode then click in on the right thumbstick to go to 1st person then there you go.