S1rSn1pedAl0t .. The screen was shaking alot towards the end, but i didn`t add that. I don`t know why that kept doing it. The only screen shake i added was in the beginning when the grenade xploded.

Well, I`m going to be honest. I did not like it very much. I did not need the shaking screen the whole time. Also, try not to show clips where you kill one guy, but then don`t kill the other guy left on the screen...its not very impressive. The music is overused...try something unique and different. However, you did have some funny/ good clips so keep at it.

For me the top things in a tage are game play, music, and editing in that order of importance. Game play wasn`t great but its your first so I`ll give you that. Editing is fine as long as I don`t get motion sickness. Now the music, why did you decide to take a over used song, use 30 seconds of it then go to a good one and use 15. And still then go to another great and another 15. I love Slipknot and me being a maggot will make any ones tage good to me if they have a knot song in there. But instead you slice song into small segments and use that is just plain wrong.

editing needs to better next time

From other good tages ive seen, try not to use ghost/ warthog kills other than that good first tage =]