S1rSn1pedAl0t .. The screen was shaking alot towards the end, but i didn`t add that. I don`t know why that kept doing it. The only screen shake i added was in the beginning when the grenade xploded.
Well, I`m going to be honest. I did not like it very much. I did not need the shaking screen the whole time. Also, try not to show clips where you kill one guy, but then don`t kill the other guy left on the screen...its not very impressive. The music is overused...try something unique and different. However, you did have some funny/ good clips so keep at it.
For me the top things in a tage are game play, music, and editing in that order of importance. Game play wasn`t great but its your first so I`ll give you that. Editing is fine as long as I don`t get motion sickness. Now the music, why did you decide to take a over used song, use 30 seconds of it then go to a good one and use 15. And still then go to another great and another 15. I love Slipknot and me being a maggot will make any ones tage good to me if they have a knot song in there. But instead you slice song into small segments and use that is just plain wrong.