you forgot the gust jump rez through ceilings technique, common example is a dead body in reception area covered in AMGs, teammate in elbow can gust jump rez and get the rez and your teammate can get away safely. Well done otherwise.

maybe position the text slightly different the new mlg video logo blocks the bottom right. it was good though maybe more showing of rezzing through objects like ceilings would have been nice but seemed like everything was covered.

nice work man, if you want help with any others i can help out. Plus i can record for extra angles.